Hi blog readers, today we will be reviewing past student work and discussing my opinion on their execution. Let's get into it!
Roll Call: I rate this one a 5/10. I did not care for the title sequence as it has somewhat poor quality and seems somewhat rushed compared to the rest of the opener. I like how the characters were introduced using a interrogation type of scene for each, and then using a voiceover to name each one in between shots. Personally, I wouldn't have been interested to see what else happens as the movie lacks detail or a wow factor that attracts me. One of my favorite parts was the use of a police car in the beginning and the incorporation of location consistently throughout the opener. My biggest piece of advice would be to attempt to make the opening less shaky, and use a better title photo/text.
New Everything: I rate this one a 2/10. I disliked the lack of music within the opener as there is generally nothing interesting going on, so the silence and sound effects feel awkward. I get the idea of him putting on headphones but they extended the silence too long to a point where the music feels random. And then there is no actual transition out of the music, it stops after he already took off his headphones. Additionally, there seems to be no "plot" besides him being a new kid who keeps listening to the same song. A strength is that the camera movements appeared to be more steady compared to other sequences.
Dreamland: I rate this opener a 9/10. I personally love the editing affects and how they used them to make it seem as if she was attracting/levitating the flowers. I also loved the mix between slow and fast movements. I feel like the dramatic change from the soft opening to the realistic atmosphere of the store was great as it created a fantasy vs. reality type of feeling. This is one of my personal favorites out of the past works as it actually intrigued me and feel somewhat like a movie I'd see in theaters. The only thing I would say is that I wish we received some internal dialogue to gain clarity as to what's happening, but the lack of it also peaks curiosity as well.
Dear Lover: I rate this opener a 8/10. I liked the strong use of nature, and how it feels as if the character is speaking to the viewer personally. I also enjoyed the flashback order of the story and how it feels as if it was a reflection back. I loved the camera work as well, as it's very steady and properly angled for the scene. I enjoyed the cliffhanger ending as it brought interest to the reader and overall think this opener was ready good. My only complaint is that the color contrast through the different shots ruins the sense of fluidity in the story, and I wished that the flashback vs. present lighting/color palette were more different from each other.
Dare to Thrill: I rate this opener a 6.5/10. I both liked and disliked this intro. It seems like a music video/creative youtube video compared a movie. I think the problem is that opener starts too suddenly, like as soon as you click play the music is blasting, the characters are running around, and it lacks a story. I honestly don't understand what is happening. I would get it if it was prosed as a flashback and something bad happens, or like there's something sudden which occurs disturbing the upbeat energy, but none of that happens. They get in the car, drive while blasting music, stop the car, look in the trunk, and walk away. Nothing that makes you say "Wait what???". I think the editing and portrayal of a fast pace is great, but it just doesn't feel like a movie.










